Bibi complete

Maybe I should have looked at this before I seen the WIP. Oh well. I'll give you an in depth critique of what I see.

This is an excellent piece, that is why I faved it in the first place. You obviously have skill and talent, and this piece shows that off very nicely. Without a doubt, I'm sure you worked hard on this.

I gave you 4 stars for the vision because I assume that you drew this picture from a photo. It was a great choice, it is a great pose and I would love to see the actual pic. The only problem I have with is is the background. Though well done, I wouldn't have picked the granite look, especially that color. It doesn't make the picture stick out.

I gave the originality 4 stars for the same reason as the vision.

4 stars for the technique because you could use a little more practice. The shading and the clothing folds were great, and you improved the hands but they still aren't perfect. The index finger on the right hand looks like a claw, and that is because you didn't define the bone structure. The face could be improved some too.

Impact, 4 stars. It grabbed my attention, nuff said.

I hope this critique helped. I love the picture, I really do, but you could use more practice, especially hand practice.